Awesome, I love limitations they always turn out to be uniquely creative. I forced myself to write something in E-Prime language which removes the verb 'to be' and risks getting really lifeless but there's always a laugh in there somewhere.
Some Call It A Sunset
The Sun was meeting all expectations of the word ‘setting’.
Beauty and madness were feelings that might have been ticked
had someone presented a bizarrely accurate multiple choice survey on a clipboard.
Chirps from the cooling motorcycle engine seemed to weave themselves in
with the shoreline ambience.
Two memories were recovered from this one place.
Two completely different lives that are now understood to be the same thing.
This solar-themed ritual appears to be a constant while I have flux characteristics.
And I’ve got the feeling that there’s more to come yet.
I had to google E-Prime to properly get my head round it- what an ace response to this prompt and one I definitely now want to try! That first line is just perfect.
Awesome, I love limitations they always turn out to be uniquely creative. I forced myself to write something in E-Prime language which removes the verb 'to be' and risks getting really lifeless but there's always a laugh in there somewhere.
Some Call It A Sunset
The Sun was meeting all expectations of the word ‘setting’.
Beauty and madness were feelings that might have been ticked
had someone presented a bizarrely accurate multiple choice survey on a clipboard.
Chirps from the cooling motorcycle engine seemed to weave themselves in
with the shoreline ambience.
Two memories were recovered from this one place.
Two completely different lives that are now understood to be the same thing.
This solar-themed ritual appears to be a constant while I have flux characteristics.
And I’ve got the feeling that there’s more to come yet.
Hail Ra!
I had to google E-Prime to properly get my head round it- what an ace response to this prompt and one I definitely now want to try! That first line is just perfect.